heartbreak won't mend without regrets
alone and silent my mind endures
traps of passion inspire tears
emptiness hurts but love is pain
your memory created the unforgettable
explanations always fail to comply
forgotten words seem so vainly useless
always I lie to comfort loss without pity
holding on is only life implicit
your lies are jewels that break
Author notes
prompt:
MyLostJewels by Floranda from deviantart.com
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carole21
Amaranthine Lover
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Comments
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a beautiful piece
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I really enjoyed reading this poem.
"traps of passion inspire tears" ...I like this line
Wonderful, expressed so well !!!!
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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Excellent metaphoric use -" your lies are jewels that break"
comparing a spider web - brilliantly done. best of luck in the contest
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You never disappoint-
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excellent work! bravo!
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