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Path that is

recent
lies and alibis
follow through the night
into the two hearts
that steal breath on my wings
forcing love
to disappear
on this path I lay
before you
foolish I was
to think you already
had it down
I wander for your
chances and your magic
touch for love
that makes this journey
of two hearts
a concept
worth dreaming of.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    Well described thought and concept of the love you sketched by the truely very honest sentiments..I love this poem..thanks for sharing it...