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Step Through ?

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Round the bends of our curious dreamworld,
We abandon the normal code,

Flitting lightly from tree to tree
Lifting life's lethargic mode.

Laughing, like its just created,
The echoes resound with glee,

Leave our old skins there behind us
Spend eternity as we're supposed to be.

Free to form a tight knit bond
Unbreakable, yet sure and fresh,

Ready, steeled and sure of foot,
So true with every breath.

 

Stories to tell and hear alike
What was hidden is safe to speak,

A door has opened wide before us
So together let us take a peek.

Minds as one we look inside
To see whats lays revealed,

A winding stair to a special place
Where nothing can be concealed.

 

A room waits there that views the world,
As it is really meant to be,

Embracing such beauty with all its flaws,
For us, and them, and we !!

 

 

 

20/10/08




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One Step Farther by ~luana
http://luana.deviantart.com/art/One-Step-Farther-8823767

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  • Amera gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    I love rhyming couplets and this is a joy to recite aloud. It's filled with fantasy and wonder. What a wonderful addition to my collection.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    I truly loved reading this.
    I also like your screen name
    I think Amera will appreciate
    your words very much. Love, Lane


  • melphleg gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Nice piece. Enjoyed the romance and fairy tale like feel to it. I reads a bit like a fantasy piece as well. Nicely done.