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Web of Tears

The web of tears that holds my soul
Here in life, where nothing glows
And trees no longer shine in my eyes
Fallen leaves as sunset dies
Into darkness I hear your voice
And it calls to me like never before
And the web of tears that never fades
Sparkles in the night like shadows in the light

The web of tears, that I gave for
A love that ended with a sigh
And the whisper of gentle breezes
That spoke of love, there is none to give
Into hells greatest void I hear your voice
And it carries me home
And the web of tears you had me cry
Remains silently a reminder in my heart

And so I move on, into the darkness
Carrying what light I have with me in my soul
Though it sparkles only in these tears of mine
It is light, given to the world
By emotion, and wept from the heart of mine
It drew a web to cover your lies
And keep me together stop me falling apart
For all the years, our love - a web of tears

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  • MysticalRayne
    October 22, 2008
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    This is splendid and your rhyme flows flawlessly - best of luck in the contest