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Spiritual DNA

No man can control this ladder

You hear evidence for and against,

And the integrity of the soul

Stands at the steps and tells

Which one goes up,

And which one goes down...

You cannot believe as you wish,

You must believe as you must,

Its a never ending ladder,

Each step a divine revelation,

Closer to spiritual truth...

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  • Tirrell
    November 16, 2008

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    Congrats on the gold, this is a supurb write, and leaves much to think upon. This write gave a nicely warm feeling as I read it. A charming peice!


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Very True

    Not only every day, but each day of each lifetime is a learning experience, a tempering of the soul, and a chance to move closer to the original source. Very Well Done My Friend. ~Peace~Gar


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    Potent dear poetess
    well done
    Thank you for this wonderfull entry
  • Bob Fox
    October 20, 2008

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    My

    always as I read your poem I am enthralled with your spiriual awareness. So many forms of God man recreates and yet what do we really know. Perhaps the answer lies within and not from books by man. Wonderful write poet.


    • Jalalbad gold member
      October 20, 2008
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      yes it is withine us, inside us are entire universes waiting to be discovered.

      • moon2u
        October 31, 2008

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        yes, I believe that as well
        the answers lie within
        we are a part of the energy of the divine
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