I never thought I could love again,
you changed how I feel,
you took this broken heart, gave me your own,
till my own heart began to heal.
You give me your love, unconditionally,
even though I am scared to give you the same,
you understand I have been hurt before,
in loves fire I felt the flame.
You make me smile when I don't want to,
Make me laugh when I want to cry,
when I am quiet and want left alone,
you just smile and ask me why.
I love it when you hold me,
even though I act like I don't,
and when I ask you to stop,
you make it tighter and won't.
I have to admit I am scared of you,
as I feel you can see inside my soul,
like my trust and you are having a fight,
wanting to take control.
I am starting to begin to trust again,
I am happy it is with you my dear,
Actually feel myself getting closer to you,
without my heart pounding with fear.
I write this as a thank you,
for all the things you do,
I may not tell you a lot,
I am madly in love with you.
A contest entry
- The Feelings you get by ChaingangAngel.
400 points, ended November 29, 2008, 24 entries
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wow
This was amazingly beautiful thanks for entering my contest
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this is so beautiful, i love the way you tell life as it is,no sugar roses you dont need them, there is a prevailing purity in all your work
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Omg
I jussz love ur poetry
lol
ur such a good writer
this was so sweet she is real lucky that u wrote this for her
Dude,like i said ur just a great writer
lol
Keep it up!
=]
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I Love IT!!!
I wish my boyfriend would write something like tis for me!!! But I think he's cheating on me. . . :-( -
naaaaw! What a cute dedication to your girlfriend! And the poem is just wow! Full of love in ever world! This truly is a perfect poem, and I hope you've showed her it!
I am sure she will fall in love with every word ^_^
Take care of yourself!
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James!
This is flocking beautiful babes! Have you shown her? If not DO IT! She will love this and wanna frame it somewhere she can look at it all the time
I am sooooooooooooo happy for you hun
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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James It pleases your old dad no end to hear that you have found a better place to be.Yes love can hurt but it can also heal That you have discovered this is wonderful .I am sure that she will get to know you the way i feel i do and that she will realize just how lucky you both are to find each other A great poem
Take care son
Dad
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Beautiful Words James
I can feel the fear in your words of letting go and trying to love again after being hurt badly before. Your words are full of longing and hope for this new love that is invading your heart.
I am glad to see you open your heart again. You gave your heart time to heal so now see where this new love goes. We can not search for love just because we are afraid of being hurt. I love your poem and I hope she gets to read it and to see how you feel in your heart. Have a beautiful day son. Hugs and Smiles.
Always here,
Mum
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