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When death collects its due,

will rippled memories echo

as

my soul

bids farewell?

 

Will my passing

elicit tears

from

many hearts?

 

When the time comes, when

‘it’ happens

 

will the hand of God

swoop me up

to the chorus

of angels

 

or will

the reptilian tail

of Satan, drag me

 

to the cheers of demons

headlong

into eternal hell?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    The ongoing joke in my house is that at least we will have family in hell. We are twisted sorts.

    Very nicely done.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    I don't believe in hell.. but if I did I can tell you, you sure wouldn't be going there my friend!

    I also don't believe in going to heaven lol.. but again, if I did, the angels would await you!

    Great write!


  • secberm
    October 20, 2008

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    It is to think about for most folks. But I know my place is reserved in my Father's home.

    Write on, bro and good luck.

    Dez


    • MJ Donnelly gold member
      October 20, 2008
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      Yes, I am a believer as well my brother and this is a conceivable scenario that I feel deserves to have a little light shed upon it.

      Thanks for reading.
      mj.