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Stepping Beyond

Step be step
they are worn down
never crumbling
slightly meek-en,
ravished in mankind's
bully and hatred,
yet we consist
the upward plight,
before hands of strife
a long time growth,
far from meaning
to others,
wrapped and clamored
inside world's of own,
seeing not the rock
that tumbles
downward,
as we climb

the next step,

beyond.

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  • katzeyez
    October 20, 2008

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    V ery nicely penned indeed. We have to make sure our minds are one step ahead of that darkness. An inspirational look at the prompt.
    Thank you and good luck.
    Katz xx