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The Chariot

Upon the cusp of a cloud
I did see a chariot in spirit
with golden hair,
he spoke no one should know,
but his face was as
a young man
the tarot card seven,

which is the warrior:

strength with in
and warning, your out of path,

along with black and white
sphinx
each with a bosom
of man and women
representing all nations,
shall pull our warrior
into victory
leaving us warned and guided
back to the path

known by God.

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  • Dark Otter
    October 23, 2008

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    A dream like image

    in a religious tone that I enjoy. It is much like a biblical vision by a prophet. After the third read, I began to understand it. A unique entry that I am glad to have in the contest.