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Pills Crack Pipes And Musty Jails

He and I became so close, I was truely in love,
He seemed to have the energy of ten men,
I knew that I would have to stride to keep up,
His kiss was so wonderful and he held me tight.

Nights were long as he said he worked late,
I being so tired of a full day at work,
He would come  home with more energy,
Not wanting dinner, but to dance.

He wouldn't sleep and wouldn't let me,
Draging me like a rag doll telling me lies,
I knew something was wrong just what?

He told me I was no fun that I needed something,
I said what? take this little pill and you be smiling,
I said no, I do not do drugs, now I knew what he does.

I started looking threw his things to find his drugs,
flushing them down the toilet, gone they are.
I went back to bed, as it was very late,
He sat there until dawn I heard him yell where are they,

I didn't answer him and covered my head,
he come and threw me out of my bed,
throwing my entire bed out the back door,
no sleep shall you have no more.

I began to pack my things in boxes,
Ive had It, want no more of you.
he begin to beat me screaming for the pills
I called 911 for help, the police took him away.

peace at last.

Author notes

as I finished this poem I hit something on the keyboard and I lost the page, I didnt know it posted without me checking it over, I come back to see it had been posted, I've made the corrections and well its finished, for those who may have seen it in the 'rough' Thanks

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  • DolceVito gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Extraordinary write...Stark-naked truth, a good take on the prompt

  • NomDePlume silver member
    October 20, 2008
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    May this soul find peace

    and never fear again.
    Thank you for sharing!


    • ebaby
      October 20, 2008
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      Thank you for taking your time to read my words of pain, I shall find my peace and I hope to not fear again but once you do fear I dont know how not too now.......

  • goalsv
    October 20, 2008

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    A very disturbing poem/story. A great way to tell a sad story that way too many could tell. Good form and flow that makes it easier to read through. Sure hope it is not about you!

    • ebaby
      October 20, 2008

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      Thanks goalsv for always being here for me, and yes it is me... I have learned alot threw all this and I wont look back. I cant!

      • goalsv
        October 21, 2008
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        I am sorry that it was you that went through this, but it has made you stronger and wiser. Am really glad that you got out of it. A Praise to God!

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