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just one bite

Here
this is for you
isn't it pretty
all golden and juicy
here take a bite.

yes, that's it.

Now sleep.

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Remember sleeping beauty when the witch gives the apple to sleeping beauty

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  • SoulWhispher
    October 20, 2008
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    Good take on the picture, alas sleeping beauty, great job, John


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 20, 2008
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    so clever!.. x


  • Leonura
    October 20, 2008
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    I do remember sleeping beauty! what a wonderful poem for it as well! A truly wonderful write!