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Wild Spirit ( HM )

Wild hearts never tame,

Thundering across the tundra,

Freeze dried, empty and cold.

 

Spirited animation,

fair to the trot,

cantering these sand storms,

dust within the heat.

 

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1. Deserts in the heart

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  • daviscth silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Another awesome poem Julie. Your words paint such a clear picture for me to enjoy. Congrats on the HM.


  • penman gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Topaze
    October 20, 2008
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    A lovely piece, very well done, best wishes in the contest.


  • chilali
    October 20, 2008

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    Nice take on the prompt! I really liked this one here! Well done! Great work. Best to you in the contest This definitely deserves a trophy. The words are just beautiful. Amazing flow!

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