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wrap bracelet becomes stethoscope

wired beads
fluttering feelings :

necklace now ~
concern conversation
for whom I'd still like to carry
as once anticipated,
helix undisplaced --

A contest entry

please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 20, 2008
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    Truly thought provoking... x


    • mbm
      October 20, 2008
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      Gypsy-Princess I was engrossed in the segue

      thanks for inspiring something that should be weighed and mine seemed to do so easily, maybe too --

      it was nice being entrant with this one,
      called Carolyn


  • Mistressnomaster
    October 20, 2008
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    Nice abstract piece, I struggle to write this style but You have done it well I think.

    MM

    • mbm
      October 20, 2008
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      MM I enjoyed entrusting my esoteric clues

      thank you for evaluating by one's own episode with how I said this. It might take a sadness like no sleep when you should so your words meld like a dream over life...

      your boost is speech enough, as I stoop from applause symbol's odd flight in so to speak lol,
      call me Carolyn

      p.s. I am ready to do another return favor from my poems, thanks for visit