September always carried shivers
in its bitter after taste of springs passing,
where persimmons touched
our lips in Autumn hues.
A contest entry
- Bittersweet by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended October 20, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Terrific
Beautiful and full of wonder, the hues that define the seasons flow into the colors that bind our eyes to natures cues. Congratulations sweetheart and the well earned Gold.
Love,
Sun and stars shine no brighter than you!
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I can clearly see why this won the golden cup. You did an amazing job with it!!! Congratulations
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As Always
As always,you manage to say so much with so few words.....Concrats on the gold,...keep up the good work,......me. -
Breathtaking!!!
Beautiful imagery! I love it. It says so much without too many unneeded words. Great write. Deserving of gold! Yours in poetry,gypsy
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nicely worded . . congrats on the gold !!
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As always you are stunning and so is this piece
I wanted to be the Autumn hues in this poem, so beautiful. Best to you in the contest
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oh this is so beautiful... x
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What a wonderful write. I love how soft this was, and yet it seemed a bit.. bitter.
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