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Painfully Pleasant





Neither leave or squeeze
juice of poisonous aconite roots
nor let your face as pale kissed
drowning soul's vigilant anguish.





















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Prompt: bittersweet
20 words

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 20, 2008
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    Intriguingly captivating... x


  • Leonura
    October 20, 2008

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    A very interesting poem, I like the emotion here. You really did such a wonderful job, few words but wonderfully displayed.