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Chained Slave





The blood of desolation
toured the camps,
spanning cities
and used shoes.

Steals youth illusions
after committed oaths,
returning again to deception,
just like an offer of future
to a chained slave.

Enriched by forces
let finishes up
as a pale shadow
with cheeks weak.

Mind to drink sips
with guffaws of acceptances
selling life to the trafficked death
along with a shattered mentality.

Only one thing we can do..
Extracting the shoes.







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  • DolceVito gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    Sad but excellent write on stark-naked truth.

  • NomDePlume silver member
    October 20, 2008
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    Sad

    makes one stop and think. A different twist indeed!
    Well done.