Late at night, when I finally go to bed
In dreams I walk the shores of time alone
There is always a hint of life in the distance
I walk many miles and never seem to see them
In dreams I walk the shores of time alone
Late at night, when I finally go to bed
I walk many miles and never seem to see them
There is always a hint of life in the distance
In dreams I walk the shores of time alone
I walk many miles and never seem to see them
There is always a hint of life in the distance
Late at night, when I finally go to bed
Author notes
Form Option B
This is my first attempt at one of these, I hope I didn't mess it up too badly.
A contest entry
- Obscure Forms 01: The Pantoum (options -- points will go up) by intoothandclaw.
550 points, ended January 5, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very interesting. something I've never seen before. good luck in the contest.


