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Making me mad all the time------------

This is a letter
from a forlorn and ship wrecked brother
waiting for the glimpse
of the beloved I love

My album shows many dirty photos
that almost deceived me altogether
in passage of time
it is a hall of shame indeed

My foam bed is almost littered with
fade out flowers
I am literally on the cries that touch the sky
All the past ones crushed my heart and soul

I heard till now that love alone is blind
I dare say now onwards that
"The cupid is also stupid and blind"
If not how many wounds rupture my heart
day in and day out ,making me mad all the time.

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5. Cupid is stupid and blind, otherwise I wouldn't have so many ex's

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  • penman gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.