Day 1: Born in Poverty...Tin Pan alley abusive alcoholic Parents...
Day 2: Education ..limited to free only ..much time spent in arcade parlour
Day 3: Employment....Liqour store robbery and car theft
Day 4: Future...Limited life probably short...
Brick-stone windows stacked with human refuge
Screaming wife begging not to hit her again
Child silently sobs on back metal fire escape
Alleyway knife fights in gangland superiority
Teen on corner puts packet in pocket...dollar bill rolls
Police sirens screaming ...feet echo down dark alleyway
Body lying on ground in pool of red ebbs life
Crime scene investigations ..keep mouth shut
Corruption and collusion aide to infinite delusion
He smiles as he didn't get caught..this time
Taking risks that one day may lose a life
Cardboard homelands Old lady pram-loads of newspaper
Needlework floorboards in crack-house blue rap
Darkness descending on sad lives never-ending
Singing Salvos with Bass drums and Tubas
Onward Christian soldiers choir singing
War-Cry newspapers in Bars and dives
This place is a war-zone for Innocent corruption
The vulnerable die mercifully quickly
Human degradation and sexual predation
A day in the life of a fully fledged Looser
We blame them and hate them ..for being that way
For we are not the bleeding heart brigade
And these bums just lay around and don't get a job
No I'm not gunna lend yah a few bob
You'll only spend it on drugs or Grog
Dead mothers callin and you uncontrollably sob
You end up in jail for the rest of your life
You were destined to be here anyway
Society will teach yah respect through corporal punishment
Get cha breakin rocks and diggin ditches
Maybe sewing the winners workin britches
Now we will make yah do good (or maybe break yah)
Great life yousa when you are a real Looser
A contest entry
- What is your definition of a LOSER???? PW..PW..PW Maybe it's you yourself. by echo-ink.
470 points, ended October 21, 2008, 14 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Yessa!
All of the above, so true.
Bell,

