you are still small
rising ebbing
murmurs and waves
my shrunken heart
I'm trying my God
look at these hands
they are climbing
endlessly, and always
bringing me failure
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I will climb for you my God, but I am so discouraged.
A contest entry
- disheartened by going nowhere.
700 points, ended October 21, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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Good poem - Thoroughly enjoyed it! Keep writing!
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oh, but He will not fail you, even when you feel you are failing... i know. well done. thank you.
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thanks. I'm glad He is so faithful, because I am not. lol
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