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Another Day


              another day. . .
       (heavy sigh)
another dune. . .

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Well, the day isn't going by as fast as this poem did!


  • crivanea
    October 29, 2008

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    !!!!..classic!!..love it ..good job w/ this..and u def. express the feeling really well..thnx for the entry