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Unforgotten Deed

Unforgotten Deed

I declare, dear woman
You've helped one in need
A gernerous great favor
This unforgotten deed

The help by your hand
Giving faith by your trust
Unlocked the door
To step through, I must

Leading to love
Not lust or deception
But the fruits of my heart,
Passion and affection

A paradise I found
By the grace of your word
Lending me hope
From all that I heard

You were the one
The support and base
For the shining star
Upon your sister's face

Paving the road
And clearing the way
Gifting this chance
I take this day

Though time was short
As together we spent,
Your sister and I
Separate ways, we're sent

But change, it does not
What you had done,
Short lived and ended
So barely begun

One day I hope
Your sister's love to regain,
And your selfless action
Not be in vain

For your heart is pure
And the actions good
Spurring the events
I willed that would

But despite what's gone
Never born from the seed
I will always remember
your unforgotten deed

Author notes

This poem is dedicated to the sister of the woman I love. Thank you Hannah Knight, you will never know how much I love and appreciate you; your deed will never be forgotten. I will miss you just as much as your sister.

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  • Bells-Kelly
    August 5

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    thats so beautiful justin and so sad. i hope she appreciateed this poem
    you are so open about how you feel and not affraid to tell anyone.

    I salute you love.

    Cheers
    Becca


  • Seven Kinky
    October 19, 2008

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    That's really sweet, Justin. I hope she appreciates this. Heart and soul on paper (er...or screen?). Wonderful write.