knotted cords of indecency
lips pressing deceit
torridly kissed flesh treats
animalistic intent
sweat fevered scent
sticky honey glazed
hormonal rage
hardened ecstasy
beads of pleasure freed
oceans depth in salty brine
effervescence delayed sublime
the temple open to prayers lust
volatile, one last thrust
voyeur moans in vocal rush
nerves signaling defeat
volcanic gush of molten heat
the taste the tang bittersweet
A contest entry
- Fuck me by sheltered.
700 points, ended October 23, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Great wording, very fluid write, the excellent words used paint a great, spicy, hot picture for the imagination.
Good write.
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I love the way this builds like passion
until the final climactic upheaval
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the temple open to prayers lust - killer line
can i pray at ur altar? LOL
give me communion and all that ecstatic jazz
jokin gal, killer write.
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