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Because of You

Because of you,
I laugh a little harder,
cry a lot less,
and smile a lot more.

Because of you,
my dreams aren't
nightmares anymore,
and  I can only think of you.

Because of you,
I believe in love,
and I can have a
happily ever after.

Author notes

MAJOR EDITING TO BE DONE I KNOW IT'S HORRIBLE. I PLAN TO ADD RHYMING

I hate sappy little love poems! I only write them because my friends pay me to write them for their BF or GF. [[i actually think they just do it to annoy me]] that's why for almost every love poem on my list, i have an anti-love poem

 

anyway, this one isn't that good. i got the idea from an icon that said "Because of you I am whole again." blah blah blah.

 

 

tell me suggestions please! i need them!

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  • storiesuntold
    October 21, 2008

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    Nice work here

    Someday you shall meet that perfect person and all these poem will come rushing back to you thats when you will know the full meaning of this love they speak of .


  • Dante Rayvenhart
    October 20, 2008

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    This is sweet. Would be even better with more in it but it's still great. Reminds me of my bf *big heartfelt sigh*

    ~love lae