Looking into the heavens
searching for something
is it your face
is it your grace
Looking out onto the sea
your eyes search for me
waiting for any sign
waiting for permission to call you mine
A gentle breeze
lifts our senses
arouses feelings
we've never felt before
Author notes
idk
10/19/08
Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored
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i like the expression you have wrote in this poem and the feelings you have shared, i like how you are "waiting for permission"... the rhyme flow is nice also keep writing, ~Amy
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You so sweetly bare your heart hoping that love is there between you....Delicately written...a joy to read!
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i know something about this poem, i liked it, an impressive read that i did enjoy, keep it flowing
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You've never ceased to impress me and I don't think you ever will. Keep it up!
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Thanks ^_^
~Lorissa~
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well thats interesting, it gave me a picture, really pretty mind you. i like it!
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This is a sweet though! I love your imagery here.
Looking to the sky and out to sea can take you to places that you have never been to before. There is so much to see out there and it makes you appreciate like even more. The possibilites are endless. Lovely work here my dear friend. It's always a pleasure to read you! Take care and have a wonderful week ahead. Thanks a lot for sharing this thought here!
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Thank u
^_^
~Lorissa~
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