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Away

I want to float away
High above the clouds
In soft dreams

I want to drift away
In light lallygagging ease
And sweet bliss

I want to slip away
Unnoticed to the world
To my own safe haven

I want to go away
To my secrete garden
Where nothing haunts

I want to fly away
To my never land
That has everything I desire

I want to fade away
Out of everyones memories
Not missed or pitied

I want to die away
Become one with the earth
In a peaceful surrender

I want to find a way
To bring myself this dream
Make my longing a reality

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  • Weird By Nature
    October 24, 2008
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    I can relate to this so much. It is very effectively written, your poem. Amazing!