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I am

Seduced by suicide
Teased by the knife

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"The Cutter" by devilmarquis at deviantart.com.

A contest entry

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  • Ravenblood
    October 19, 2008

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    Good poem and very good take on the promt.

    Congratulations on winning gold. XD

    Claire-Anne


  • KayJay
    October 19, 2008
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    A wonderful take on the prompt. Well done!
    Ken


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    October 19, 2008

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    Hmmm... I feel like the two lines should be in the reverse-order, but this is lovely nonetheless. Well done, and best of luck.

    Laura