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Separation Anxiety

Emotional release
carried to extremes
ends pain.


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Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: "The Cutter" by devilmarquis at deviantart.com
7 words

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  • Leonura
    October 20, 2008
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    that be one scary picture. But the poem beneath distracts from it. a emotional write.


  • trekkergirl
    October 20, 2008

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    hehehhehehe. I love the title and you can bet I was totally surprised when I clicked on the poem and that picture showed up. I'd just bet there was some separation anxiety going on there. Great job writing this. Great picture to go with it. And just totaly a wonderful write.


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    outstanding words and the message is clear.
    you did wonderful with the prompt.

    Riftkin


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    wow. talk about hitting right on... you did an excellent job with the prompt. I love it.

    kat



  • Arizona Sunset
    October 20, 2008

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    wow...quite the head turner! lol best to you in this contest, this is great! blessings always ~Trisha~


  • Ravenblood
    October 19, 2008

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    Nicely written, and thanks for the comment.

    and sometimes once the pain starts its impossible to stop. Annoying isnt it.

    Claire-Anne


  • Xianaria gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    Nicely done~
    sometimes taking things to extremes may end pain, but with the end result help us learn or keep us from growing? Hmmm


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    October 19, 2008

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    Hmmm... I have a poem by the same title But yes, I can see how this relates to the picture... Well done, and good luck to you!

    Laura

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