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Dismembered Love

You said,

it wouldn’t hurt.


You lied.

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  • KayJay
    October 19, 2008
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    Darkly done... without losing the emotional edge. Well done and best of luck...
    Ken


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    October 19, 2008

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    Nicely penned, with such an air of simplistic truth; pain is love, and love is pain. Well done, and good luck!

    Laura