A feeling of being alive through memories,
felt heart beats volatile to tremble senses,
shot by your eyes, I got injured, homeless,
lost in a vacuum regretting the day forbidden.
House ecclesiastical, heart in desert mirages,
abandoned on a grief's bed , in wound's command,
disappointment in interior, frustrated screams
excruciating for an injustice, not being understood.
Slam phrasing tenderly with a moonless night,
Is it this yours, an inspiration or melancholy ?
far to the bottom of kissed touches, as in mist
constantly haunt past's wonderful moments saved.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: 1. Deserts in the heart
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST. by penman.
900 points, ended October 20, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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