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Make me Belive

Make me Belive
show me that love exist
i wanna  feel
like never befor

Make me Belive
that happy is a good thing
that love isnt a lie, or a  fake
that the skys arereally blue

Make me Belive
that fire burns red
show me dat im not alone
Make me Feel
that everything isnt a lie
that i do exist

Make me Belive
life is worth somthing
that evil is dosnt exist
that ppl do care

set me free
brake the chains
that hold me back
that  keep the real me hidden
i wanna be set free
i want to belive
that all is TRUE....

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  • poetgypsie
    October 20, 2008

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    well this a good write you have made alot of spelling mistakes my suggestion is fix them all. Thanks for sharing