I know my dear,
You do not think it is fair.
It is my time to go.
If I could stay I would but honey I can't
So I decided to write you this to let you know,
Just what you mean to me,
All the stars in the sky could not hold up,
To love I have for you.
When you came in to my life I need you the most.
Don't follow behind me,
You have a hole life to live.
We had many years together,
That I hold close to my heart.
Through the good & bad times you we're always by my side.
Just remember I will always be in your heart.
When you hear the wind blow know that is me,
When you see a butterfly come by you know that is me.
One thing I ask from you is to keep going on.
We will see one another again sometime.
Don't worry about me I will be okay.
Please let my family know I did not suffer.
I love you with all of my heart,
See you soon my love.
Author notes
A) Good-by letter to someone you love before you die
A contest entry
- If you were to die by Starz of Heaven.
625 points, ended October 25, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I tryed
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aww. This is a beautiful letter!
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beautiful
Sweetheart, you have penned here a very beautiful Goodbye letter.
While reading your words, my mother's face came into view, it was as if she was telling me herself what you had written.
I don't know why I was drawn to this poem, I was going to read you latter on, but something told me to click onto a poem and this was the one.
I have been thinking about her a lot lately, really missing her badly, wishing I could have just 5 more minutes with her before she leaves this world, just so I could tell her in the flesh, just how much I appreciated her and loved her deeply.
I believe your poem was her message to me.
I thank you for writting such beautiful words, they have touched very deeply.
I bless you much love and happiness.
Take care sweet heart.
your loving Angel,
~Anne~
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This is an amazing letter for the one that you care for thank you muchly for your entry into my contest best wishes always
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touching..
and very thoughtful. the subject of passing is not pleasant but a reality and you somehow softened it..
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Very beautiful!
Slightly different form what i have been reading of yours, but still so very emotional. Great job. -
thats so beautiful and meaningful. way to bear your soul
Rose
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