you make me smile so often,
it's so strange and unlike me,
but i like the changes love can bring,
the sweetness it pours into everything.
the stars have never shown brighter,
the sky never looked so clear,
you brought back the sound of my laughter,
and chased away every tear.
i love you with a fire that can not be extinguished,
burning hotter, brighter every day,
loves passion, a fire that consumes me,
bringing back colors that had faded to grey
love has given me reason to live,
and love has given me hope again,
happiness in a moment,
sweet, contented sighs,
this is amazing,
wondrous,
bringing tears of joy to my eyes,
the sweetest, truest love
is pure and never dies.
Author notes
for someone that i thought loved me, but i know doesn't really even care. i still will always love him.
vampire angel (aka Rebecca)
A contest entry
- What no Golds? by catalyst..
400 points, ended October 26, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites by leander.
730 points, ended November 30, 2008, 147 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honest oppinions please and thank you.
Comments
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Ah, how familiar that sounds what you've written in your author's notes... One day you'll get over that actually, and be able to love someone other.
Thank you for entering the contest!
Leander -
The rhyming in this was amazing as was the emotion
please put your an in the authornotes.
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