like a rainbow I
want to fade away, to not
be noticed, even
missed, instead to be like
early summer's dew
or like the mist on
the shore, shimmering and cool
yet dissipating
to become a clear vapor,
broken apart by sunshine
Author notes
Option D
A contest entry
- If you were to die by Starz of Heaven.
625 points, ended October 25, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Well I think that you did a great job with this sometimes I wish I could just fade away thanks for your entry best wishes always be well
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Aw....
Why would you want to fade away??
I'm sure someone would miss you!
Brilliant analogy here... the idea of just dissipating into nothingness... -
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Heh, thanks. Don't worry, I picked this purely for the poetic value. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Well, poetic value--- It rocks!
Sounds lush!
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