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Missed Again

The reason I’m single
and so carefree
with a trail of ex’s
behind me.
I know I’m not to blame
eyes I got.
That hot flaming arrow
I never shot.
Struck I was at sometime
he was slime.
Stupid little Cupid
and his flaming arrow

Author notes

5. Cupid is stupid and blind, otherwise I wouldn't have so many ex's

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    LOL! Sorry I can not help it...this is me...damn cupid just needs to keep his arrows away from me...much safer and comfortable that way...nice take on the prompt...great flow and little humor in truth for many of us...best to you!
    mystic


    • januaryrain gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      Thank you, I agree, he can keep his arrows away from me too, lol.
      Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.


  • penman gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done Best of luck in the contest.


  • maktub
    October 20, 2008
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    nice. great write....a bit amusing...but catchy...
    Smile♫


    • januaryrain gold member
      October 20, 2008
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      Thank you, wow you've been busy reading my poems, thank you, I really appreciate your comments.

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