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children
like sad saplings
near the river bend and
wonder when the chemicals will
kill them
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A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVIII - by Bear - by Arkbear.
825 points, ended October 22, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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....oh.....LOVE the Title!
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Hey Timmy ~
Aesthetics are superb.....message is fab......hmmm......will it win a Gold here?
....we shall see, as there are a few more challenging yours at the moment
Good luck and God bless you!
Bear ~
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clever
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And now you are Erin Brokovich?? Is there no end to your abilities..no!...wait I got it, you didn't realise she had jugs did ya LOLOLOL
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i don't even know who that is
what's she got in the jugs? -
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Sheesh you need to get out more! She was the lady (played by Julia Roberts) that took on the chemical companies that polluted towns water supplies and soil...go get the dvd!!!
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All to true. A sad aspect of modern day reality. Great write. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Fantastic, Tim, great shape too (not you) hehe, great work and good luck,
Alexander Battenburg.
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i'm definitely not in this good shape... lol
thanks Alexander the great
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Profound and clever
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Very creative
and deserving
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the children don't know
the parents don't care
the length of a life is a lifetime
there is a point at which it does not continue
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a sad commentary on the fact that the only think the so called Industrial Revolution is revolting is our earth mother. hmm industrial revolution - a civil war of the most heinous kind.
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