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Dead Love

The moon rises as you take the plunge

Straight into my heart,the knife goes deeper,

I'm fighting for my life and you dont even care.

As the tears stain my cheek,and the blood stains your shirt,

you look away and smile.

I gave you my heart and you ripped it into

what did i do, to make you hate me?

You Munipulate,Humiliate,and Defy my love,

i can barely breathe!

Your the last person that saw me alive

now im dead and my blood stays..

You try to hide it but, i'm gone,

you break down in tears...

How could you, She'll never love you like i do!

You brought out the best in me then, you broke my trust.

As i lay there dead on that cold hard ground,

it's still you that i love, still you that i long for, it's always been you.

But i guess we'll never know,

i'm dead and your alive!

but now your dead to me,

only a memory!

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i wrote this one myself, its called originality...get some!

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  • Ms.spooki
    June 16
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    Emotion,is pouring off...you can feel everything as if...you yourself are feeling the pain...


  • EmilyMunden
    October 29, 2008
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    wow

    you can really feel the pain and the emotion i really like this poem