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The Careful Farmer

His farm was located along a rippling brook so blue,
calm now it had forsaken its horrifying mountain trip
where it careened down a waterfall of iridescent hue,

and was not yet to form a bubbling fountain drip.

 

He had been careful to avoid lowland and rocky heights

and began tilling the rich black cabbage laden soil.

He also joined other freemen to rigidly defend his rights

from foreigners who sought to exploit his toil.

 

He was an American facing untamed wilds ahead,

but held no remorse for the quaint life he chose,

and felt his heart quickening at the land he'd bred

as with happiness his day came to its close.

 

A farmer must tread carefully as he tills his fields

each day, be always watchful for game or a stray

and make sure his family is safe as he shields

them from the wild. Their snug safety is his pay!

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cabbage, careen, careful, farmer, fountain, heighten, horrify, quaint, quickening, remorse, rigid, ripple.

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  • Denerica
    November 8, 2008
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    Well captured vision, loved it


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    I believe "foreighners" should be "foreigners", unless this is a spelling that I am not aware of. I will be back to check on this. Plenty of time before the final judging.

    You have made good use of the wordbank in your tale of early farming days in America. Strong and rich with family values and heritage. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


    • OldBear34 silver member
      November 3, 2008
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      You're Right.

      You're right about the misspelling. I'd edit it if I could figure out how to do so. Not to worry, I'll figure it out.