'I love you'
How many different ways it can be said,
in a moment of silence,
or at the moment a tear sheds,
three immortal words that can change a life,
end a war,
or cause a lifetime of strife,
So many ways to say,
though right now I'm hearing more than sounds,
feeling more than than your warmth,
seeing more than the beautiful blushing of your cheeks in the chapping cold,
and it seems like,
the silence,
says more than
'I love you' could
A contest entry
- ...♥...How to say "I love you"...♥... by Rebekah-Ann.
800 points, ended November 11, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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In the silent moments you find more meaning than in a thousand words spoken!!!
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Very good love poem!
Love can be twisted and sad, as your poem suggests! Your images are very good, as is your wording. I like this poem as it is easy to identify with! Good work, friend!
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lol
yes there may be lots of ways
but it just never seems to be enough
like you always want to say "you know im not just saying that, right ?" lol
its just like blah theyre just words ! i want you to see it anf fell it like i mean it !
hmm ok ima get out of here before i go on another rant lol
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