I see her in my arms
Smiling up at me
Her soft expression calms
The fire of my glee
Why I see her,
It’s difficult to tell
But I know the wonder
Of my beautiful ‘gel’
She might be up in heaven
If you believe such a thing,
But for everyone who’s leaden
with Love that means everything
She is the one, the most special
My angel, my perfect dream
Maybe someday I will meet my belle,
(but) Not for some time, it would seem...
Author notes
Just writing what I felt when I closed my eyes for a few moments... What many people have, what some want or dream of, or what some have lost...
A contest entry
- Close your eyes and tell me what you see by Meroza.
1100 points, ended November 8, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great write here
I do this quite often for when times get hard I take myself to a more loving place and it sooths my soul
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haR.. 'Of my beautiful ‘gel’'
Is that hair gel?.. cos I gotta say, I think my dream's more likely to involve actually jelly (not that my vegetarian lifestyle allows me to consume such jelly).
This reminds me of a poem I once wrote. That's nice
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'Gel' as in girl but with an accent, like a cockney accent or whatever! (I ran out of ideas for a rhyme...)
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Well, my man, that's disgusting! You'd not forgive me for sticking that crap rhyme in just because it rhymes! I do, however, like the fact that only the 'gel' has an accent.. that's pretty phillip
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Thank you very much, the concept of seeing with your eyes closed opened that poem up! A great idea for a contest!
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Mh...I have to admit I do dream about having a girl in my harms from time to time, but luckely they're just dreams
This poem is well written and I could relate myself in it so well, and thats always good!
Thanks for taking the time to enter and best if luck.
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