Timbers shiver cold in brisk wind
relinquishing sanity for a moment of
insanity.
Caution runs within each vein
keeping heart beat thumping hard;
orations mixed with ghostly sound
retreating as ones ears can hear
the sound of chocolate laced with nuts
rendering soft
echoes in bags
as children giggle please and
thanks upon a Halloween.
Author notes
Background Courtesy of: VLADSTUDIO
In a list
A contest entry
- ~ Halloween Acrostic~ by Frozentearz.
700 points, ended October 29, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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What an amazing poem penned in splendid form.
The Backgound fits perfectly, like it.
You've turned trick O treating into a work of art.
Splendidly done in vivid colour and taste.
Be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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Thank you. I love playing with Acrostic.
So pleased you enjoyed this one. ~Pamela 
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nicely penned for the prompt . . congrats on the trophy
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carole21
Thank you so much. Happy Halloween. ~Pamela 
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Great acrostic, Pam. Love the echo of chocolate and nuts....Congratulations on the Bronze!
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Neon
Thank you so much. I did have a bit of fun with this one. I appreciate your kind words so much and congrats to you on the silver. Happy Halloween.
~Pamela
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You have done a wonderful job as mentioned you would not know it was an acrostic at first glance
Great flow great meaning
Happy Haunting to you and yours and thanks for joiing in always a joy to have you in a contest
Warm thoughts.
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Frozentearz
Thank you so much for your lovely comment and the honor of bronze in your contest. This was such fun! Thank you again. ~Pamela
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wow!!!
stunningly good! i never even thought about this being an acrostic..i was so caught up in the piece, excellent my friend!
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Richard
Thank you my friend. I did have a bit of fun with this one. Thanks so much. ~Pamela
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NICE. this is an awesome poem! and you wrote it so well, i didnt even notice it was an acrostic till i saw it at the bottom.
and nice background too =)
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alivefromlove
Thank you so much. This was just - - - fun! Thanks again. ~Pamela
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