we are all faced with demons from our past
we are all faced with lies and deceit
life is full of pain and hurt
sometimes it can seem unforgiven and never ending
life kicks us when were down
and it seems quiting is the only way
but thats to easy
we must remember what our christ lord jesus has done for us
he didnt give in when he knew his fate
he didnt give in when he was beaten nearly to death
but most of all he didnt give in when he was carrying the cross
up the unforgiven hill to die for our sins
this is why i will never give in
A contest entry
- Never Give Up (1000 Points) Lots of HMs by sOuL.
750 points, ended December 14, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think
Comments
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Amen
Such a true and awesome write here I must say Bravo it couldnt be written better than this
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Thank you for entering my contest with this very very good poem
the background is also very nice
i think you have really done a good job
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