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the New Kids on the Block

Well you are the new kids.
 My master just brought you in.
Funny you don't look like me.
Just get settled in.

First you need a bath.
Let me clean you all.
Maybe your stripes ,
Will blend in after all.

You guys are the cutest.
So you don't look like me.
You wait till you are older.
Then everyone will see.

Now get in for a group shot.
One more lick from me.
Smile you little guys.
It is babies and me.

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  • AnnD Moderators member
    November 3, 2008

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    Aw. this is just so cute, and that dog taking charge of the babies like that. I love your poem it certainly does the picture justice. Well done.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    sweet, sweet, sweet!
    great write on the prompt..
    adorable and funny!
    way to make us awe........

    ears/Seattle


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    Cute write !

    What a great take on your chosen pic I enjoyed your poem. Best of luck


  • Legend silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the image given Guess the new kid may not be so loving with mum when the get bigger
    Excellent Good luck in the contest


  • Katie Lazette
    October 19, 2008
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    Your poem is very cute mac and it goes with the pic. Good luck in the contest. Katie

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