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Hidden Identity

Some want to be known by what they are
others just by what they do
by who they helped
by who they judged

I wish I had any of those things
just one....

I want someone to look past me
not see me
not want to be me
not want to save me

I wish I could fade away
just fade away...

They wish they could see what I've seen
do what I've done
lived how I've lived
loved how I've loved

I wish I was who they saw
who they want me to be...

I've done what they've said I do
I wish I could be who they see
they want what I've done
but they have one thing I can never have...

They have something so perfect
so pure
so unique
they have a name

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Here you go! Hope I did okay with this one.

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  • LostInAdulthood
    November 1, 2008
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    Amazing. I think this is a really amazing write. Best of luck in your contest.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Hidden Identity


    Good luck to you

    passions