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frozen time

Missing image
Cadence haunts my memory,
measured step,
treasured voice,
rising .

Count the stairs as he mounts,
waiting time for me floats.
Waiting.
Frozen time.

Ice blue  eyes,
match his snow capped alpine skies
Muscles trained on rock and ice,
glacier smooth his vice-like thighs.

Hands that touched  Kathmandu’s shrines.
Skin as soft as eiderdown,
laugh lines dance around his eyes.
Silver crowns his brow

Pulls me laughing to my bed.
Fears as melting memory.
Feel not envy for lost time,
horde love's shadows sublime

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returned love, YES, picture katmandu

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  • fake-or-real-smile
    October 20, 2008

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    The rules state that you need to put the option you chose in your N/A , message me when it is done with the name of your poem and I will come back and comment on the actual poem.

    Rebecca


    • Draig aine gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      option

      did it yesterday, love returned, actually past life love returned, way cool for me