I crawl thru a hole in a fence
and run into
a hole in a brick wall.
Peering into it
a keyhole
peering into it..
naked frenzy honouring Dionysies.
Pyres of green flames
crackling with sounds of laughing crocodiles
interwoven with the moaning copulations.
I am tapped on the shoulder
by a nymph with a knife.
She wants a sacrifice,
I offer my condolences,
she offers her everything
Author notes
"of course im outta my mind, its dark and scary in there" - author unknown
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Comments
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This was a good entry. Thank you, and good luck.
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edgy and comical at the same time
I bet it's dark and scary in there... lol
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Wow, that sounds like a nightmare to me. This really is dark and scary, and perfectly captured into words. I got a little short breathed reading about all those holes
Thanks for taking the time to enter and best if luck.
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