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Not a day goes by

Not a day goes by
that I dont think of you
after all that we've been through
I never stopped loving you.

Maybe after all these years
if you miss me, have no fear.
I'l' be here
I'll be waiting.

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  • mysticalmind
    October 19, 2008
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    it was ok?

    it was ok. what do ya'll think?