He has heard our pleas
and answered our prayers
for it is now time
for all His children
to come home.
He has given us
this staircase
so that we may come to Him.
No do not linger, my friends
we should all be excited
for once the journey is ended
we shall be with Him in paradise.
Author notes
I hope you like this.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Ladder to Heaven by Angelo di Luce.
400 points, ended November 6, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How full of hope your poem is
We shall be with him in Paradise
Amen, to that
Best wishes -
The back ground is pretty.


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Well the circles are familiar, have seen them many times
Thank you for your so pretty entry -
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okay not at all sure what you are referring to? I'm not done with this entry yet. Come back when I am okay?
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