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The Journey

He has heard our pleas
and answered our prayers
for it is now time
for all His children
to come home.

He has given us
this staircase
so that we may come to Him.

No do not linger, my friends
we should all be excited
for once the journey is ended
we shall be with Him in paradise.

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 22, 2008
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    How full of hope your poem is
    We shall be with him in Paradise
    Amen, to that
    Best wishes


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    The back ground is pretty.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 19, 2008
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    Well the circles are familiar, have seen them many times
    Thank you for your so pretty entry


    • trekkergirl
      October 20, 2008
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      okay not at all sure what you are referring to? I'm not done with this entry yet. Come back when I am okay?