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All Hallow's Eve

When darkness comes upon this eve,
beware stakes and knives that cleave.
Demons come from graves of rest,
search for victims in death's quest.

Masquerading within reflection,
living dead avoid detection.
Capture lost souls what they seeks,
heart stopping fear as odor reeks.

They lurk about you dare not sleep,
pure evilness in dreams they creep.
Nightmarish ghouls, stench on breath,
it brings to you the hint of death.

Upon this eve they come for you,
ghosts and goblins and witch's brew.
All Hallow's Eve with mouth agape,
try as you may there's no escape.



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  • Pietro456
    October 20, 2008
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    Another winner !

    Sandy, You've done it agaon ! I really like this poem. Keep up th egreat work.


    • Sandygram
      October 21, 2008
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      Nice Comment

      Thank You Peter. Always nice when you stop by. Ssandy


  • Floorboards
    October 20, 2008

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    Oooh nice one, Sandy! greetings from Bulgaria my friend , loved the sense of foreboding in the last verse my friend,

    well done and good luck,
    Alex.

    • Sandygram
      October 20, 2008
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      BOO TO YOU TOO!!!!!!!!

      To the undead in Bulgaria, I thank you for this SPOOKTACULAR comment.
      Beware when the FLOORBOARDS creak. And the full moon begins to peek.

      Hugs and Smiles,
      Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    October 20, 2008

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    The Spirit was Captuared

    You have crafted a most unique and scary halloween poem, it moves all who are lucky enough to read it, great job as allways, blessing John

    • Sandygram
      October 20, 2008
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      BOO JOHN!!!!!!!!!!!!

      So glad you enjoyed te Halloween poem my dear friend. Hope the day is going well for you. You take care.

      Hugs and Smiles,
      Sandy


  • tawk gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Wow such a scary poem. I so enjoyed reading it. Wonderful and vivid imagery and emotions. The hairs on my neck were raised while reading. Good luck in the contest my dear friend. hugs


    • Sandygram
      October 20, 2008
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      Thank you Tawk

      So nice to have you stop by. Hope all is well. Blessings to you and yours.

      Take Care,
      Sandy


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 19, 2008

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    OH I got goosebumps and a bit of the giggles seeing a skeleton playing the trumpet

    What a funly dark write for halloween! Boy am I glad it isn't celebrated here


    Best of Luck hun
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda


    • Sandygram
      October 20, 2008
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      BOO BOO AND THANK YOU

      So glad you enjoyed my friend.
      Hope you have a "Spook tacular" day.

      Always, Sandy

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