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Bond Unbroken



such a young bride

their bond remains unbroken

even as his body died



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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008

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    Wow The sadness in the final line alone is strong and then combine with the first two ... Excellent


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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